Friday, January 23, 2015

Flash Fiction Friday, 23 January 2015 ~ Black Ribbons of Tears #iamwriting #writing #erotica

Flash Fiction Friday and we are doing 100 word erotic shorts based upon the photograph below. It is reminiscent of...what? What does she make you think of? Read on to see how this picture inspired my muse.

When you are done, please have a visit with my prurient partners to see just how this photo effected them--you are sure to be entertained. Do leave us a comment; I personally find it so encouraging.

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Black Ribbons of Tears
She stood at the end of Barlothaffen Bluff staring into the darkening seam where the gray sky sank into yet grayer seas. Her cloak wove through the blustery airfoils like a soaring black Valkyrie. Her hair, in wisps and errant curls, escaped the warm confines of the hood to fly for unfettered moments from the restraints of black ribbons that adorned her hair.

She seemed numb to the coldyet frozen, only…....I knew she was not.

Each day, a tear seared her pale cheek in disappointment when she turned to leave in the darkening night as the moon bid the sun, and love, good-bye.

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  1. The lady in the moon! What an excellent take on the picture. Very haunting images. Great piece.

  2. Excellent take on the pic and brilliantly written. I wish she didn't feel so sad. Great flash Muffy x

  3. Sad and beautiful at once. Pure poetry. You bring the scene into clear view. Great flash.

  4. My Goodness... so sad and mournful... tragically beautiful.


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