Thursday, January 16, 2014

Thursday Taster, January 16, 2014 ~ The Para-Portage of Emily

Each Thursday, a group of very talented author's gather to share their Works-in-Progress. It is a chance to read short excerpts from the Thursday Tasters WIP's, help keep them disciplined and their progress on track. So please read the excerpts then show some love and encouragement by leaving a comment. It means so much to each of us. Enjoy...

The Para-Portage of Emily

The truth is that Emily had discovered the shadows created by light and dark.  Furthermore, she discovered she liked it there, too.  She had still been in control of her destiny then, but not anymore.  In fact, she became a prisoner of the shadow’s seduction…

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The hours passed and Emily slept to the crackling sounds of the fire.  And then, she dreamed…

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A young woman ran from a man pursuing her. He collected the young woman in his arms in the foyer of this house and they entered the library, in one another’s arms.  He took her to the couch, where Emily slept, and placed her down gently.  As the man indulged himself in the sweet specter of her breasts, his right hand dropped between the young woman’s legs and gently, inch by slow inch, raised her full hem and petticoats until he found the naked treasure he sought. 

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The room was nearly dark, save the floor lamp above Emily's waking head.  The fire embers glowed a vibrant red, hot orange-gold and burning blue-white-yellow against the black shadowed backdrop of the firewall.  She composed herself and straightened her clothes.  She allowed a lone hand to search between her legs for evidence of this consuming dream.  She had actually cum in her sleep, while immersed in the vivid vision.  She languished, rolled and stretched into the memory, holding onto the pleasant remains of the dream, smiling intimately to......…to herself and her shadow lover.  

It had felt so real to her; who was he?
“...and when will he return?”



9 comments :

  1. Amazing writing. Your visuals were perfect I felt like I was right there watching him enjoy sweet pleasures. Can't wait for more

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  2. I loved it...I can understand how the shadows captured her... :-)

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  3. I love a good erotic ghost tale.....amazing story!

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  4. Sexy and sensual. Can't remember what I wrote this morning, but this is a beautifully written scene. Need more!

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  5. Beautifully done! I love when an author can make a dream seem real... unless it turns out to be real! All the better! Hint! LOL!

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  6. Although I have read most of this beginning in a different format, you have woven the dream sequence deliciously and delicately. I want to read further with her shadow and if he'll come true to life. Excellent work.

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