Friday, January 10, 2014

Flash Fiction Friday, January 10, 2014 ~ Workout Agony

Flash Fiction Friday and a hunka, hunka is the subject in a photograph about which all the prurient participating authors must write a 100 word short.  I definitely got carried away on this one and had to reel myself back in before I missed deadline!!!

Now, it is all about having a wee bit of sexy, harmless fun only it is different with each author you visit to read their take on this same picture. You can visit them via the link above or I have them listed, one by gorgeous one, like links in a playful bedroom chain below. Once you have read my wee short, please leave me a comment on the blog if you feel inclined, then hop on over and begin your adventure with all the others..........Enjoy :) xo


Workout Agony
Today, when he didn’t see her, he was disconcerted.

He was changing the link chain for the gym punchbag when he saw her arrive. His breath froze in his chest; his heart repeated a fluttered rhythm and his feet were weighted in place.

Her long auburn curls were tied in a scarlet ponytail with wisps of errant red curls framing her porcelain face. Her cheeks, flushed from the bitter cold, magnified her emerald eyes. A sprinkling of iridescent sweat glistened between her breasts. She moved gracefully toward him with a radiant smile.

“Need help with that?”

Then her eyes dropped to his heavier agony.

“I...I..ahhhhh…………..”


Participating Authors




14 comments :

  1. I love the reference to his heavier agony below. Beautiful description of her, especially the sweat between her breasts.Very Sexy Flash.

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  2. Aaaah indeed. And will she help relieve his agony? ;-) Great flash, Muffy!

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  3. So much sexual tension in just a few words. Great stuff!

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  4. Engrossing. I want to know more about both of them.

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  5. Enticing! I want their story/ies to continue!

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  6. That was one sexy flash. You should continue their story. I love how he describes her. Beautiful work, Muffy.

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  7. Great tension in this one and love the heavier agony!
    ~Decadent

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  8. Hopefully I haven't triple posted. Great job Muffy. The song added to the heat of the moment

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  9. Great description. Like watching a movie. Hot, to say the least :-)

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  10. oh that works so beautifully, A fantastic build up..

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  11. Wonderful flasher. I love your descriptions and hope swhe helps him with his 'need'. Excellent

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  12. I hope she gives him a "hand". I love the detail of her as she seemed to come alive through your words. Awesome flash as always. Hot and spicy and purrfectly yummy..

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  13. Great flash with just a hint of naughtiness

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  14. Your such a tease Muffy leaving us hanging ....you know I want MORE!

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