Friday, January 17, 2014

Flash Fiction Friday, January 17, 2014 ~ Surrender Love

Flash Fiction Friday's subject photograph is a bit cryptic, open to wide interpretations by a bevy of talented authors. The challenge is to express that creativity in a mere 100 words or less. You will be amazed at the variety of short stories photo fodder like this ignites within us.  

 Please be kind and show your reaction by leaving a comment on the author blogs, but first...please read mine. I've titled it ~ "Surrender Love". Enjoy.....
Surrender Love
The room graduated in soft light to undulating waves of darkness: light from the fish-tank, flickers from the candles and moving shadows cast by the bleeding lava lamp. The space was a soft whisper of mingled sounds: the small fish-tank aerator, Dave Matthews playing, the rhythmic drip of the sink in the adjoining bathroom.

I heard only my heart as the rustle of my clothes floated into soft puddles on the floor beside his.

Naked, standing together locked in an embrace of magnetized heat; he cupped my face tenderly and started at my eyelids until he exploded inside me.

Inception: magical, mystical love surrendered………
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13 comments :

  1. Faberge NostromoJanuary 17, 2014 at 2:42 AM

    Lovely - lyrical, poetic. So atmospheric.

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  2. UnknownJanuary 17, 2014 at 6:30 AM

    The background descriptions gave so much more to the mood than you ever have written before, building the luscious moment of heated love between the two lovers. As always you have written a beautiful flash.

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  3. Naomi ShawJanuary 17, 2014 at 7:09 AM

    Wonderful flash. Eloquent descriptions in so few words building up the special loving moment are fab. I love it

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2014 at 7:28 AM

    Beautiful, Muffy. Such wonderfully sensuous descriptions :-)

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  5. Karin BaineJanuary 17, 2014 at 8:46 AM

    So atmospheric and sensual <3

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  6. Leann MitchellJanuary 17, 2014 at 10:22 AM

    Vividly Beautiful, Muffy. Absolutely captivating.

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  7. UnknownJanuary 17, 2014 at 11:09 AM

    The feel of this one has a hopeful poetic feel to it. Thank you for sharing.

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  8. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2014 at 3:16 PM

    You never fail to transport me into a sort of dream-state. I'm not just with her, I'm experiencing what she is, from the shadows and light (which is perfection that I just love) to the climactic embrace. My highest praise is, I wish I had written this! Way to go!

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  9. BrantwijnJanuary 17, 2014 at 3:32 PM

    The sensual appeal of this is wonderful; your imagery makes it intense!

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  10. Julian SpongJanuary 18, 2014 at 10:10 AM

    Beautiful and romantic

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  11. S.J. MayleeJanuary 18, 2014 at 10:47 AM

    Truly lovely. You've captured this moment with fabulous descriptive phrases. Beautifully done.

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  12. Rolling Muse in The RosesJanuary 21, 2014 at 12:23 AM

    Wow and love the detail, sweet and soothing. Loved it! :)

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  13. Bitten PressJanuary 27, 2014 at 8:23 PM

    Magical beauty of a story!

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I was born when we kissed; I died when we parted. I lived in your embrace while we loved..........

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