Friday, January 17, 2014

Flash Fiction Friday, January 17, 2014 ~ Surrender Love

Flash Fiction Friday's subject photograph is a bit cryptic, open to wide interpretations by a bevy of talented authors. The challenge is to express that creativity in a mere 100 words or less. You will be amazed at the variety of short stories photo fodder like this ignites within us.  

Please be kind and show your reaction by leaving a comment on the author blogs, but first...please read mine. I've titled it ~ "Surrender Love". Enjoy.....


Surrender Love
The room graduated in soft light to undulating waves of darkness: light from the fish-tank, flickers from the candles and moving shadows cast by the bleeding lava lamp. The space was a soft whisper of mingled sounds: the small fish-tank aerator, Dave Matthews playing, the rhythmic drip of the sink in the adjoining bathroom.

I heard only my heart as the rustle of my clothes floated into soft puddles on the floor beside his.

Naked, standing together locked in an embrace of magnetized heat; he cupped my face tenderly and started at my eyelids until he exploded inside me.

Inception: magical, mystical love surrendered………


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13 comments :

  1. Lovely - lyrical, poetic. So atmospheric.

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  2. The background descriptions gave so much more to the mood than you ever have written before, building the luscious moment of heated love between the two lovers. As always you have written a beautiful flash.

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  3. Wonderful flash. Eloquent descriptions in so few words building up the special loving moment are fab. I love it

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  4. Beautiful, Muffy. Such wonderfully sensuous descriptions :-)

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  5. Vividly Beautiful, Muffy. Absolutely captivating.

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  6. The feel of this one has a hopeful poetic feel to it. Thank you for sharing.

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  7. You never fail to transport me into a sort of dream-state. I'm not just with her, I'm experiencing what she is, from the shadows and light (which is perfection that I just love) to the climactic embrace. My highest praise is, I wish I had written this! Way to go!

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  8. The sensual appeal of this is wonderful; your imagery makes it intense!

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  9. Truly lovely. You've captured this moment with fabulous descriptive phrases. Beautifully done.

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  10. Wow and love the detail, sweet and soothing. Loved it! :)

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I was born when we kissed; I died when we parted. I lived in your embrace while we loved..........

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