Yep, you are right; it's Friday and a bunch of perverts get together and create 100 word flash fiction stories based upon a single source photograph common to us all. Some are sexy, others full of vampires or comedy; some are sensuous, erotic, mouth-watering. This one is none of those.
But, as always, we aim to please any way the muse inspires us, so do please, leave a comment. Then, please visit the other contributing author pages and read how the same picture inspired them, to what, you won't know unless you go read them. They are listed on our group page above and below or, if you prefer, the writers are listed one by one like tears.
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Henry waited confidently for his turn to dive from the 30
meter springboard-platform. He’d done it a thousand times before and a thousand
times before that.
But, as always, we aim to please any way the muse inspires us, so do please, leave a comment. Then, please visit the other contributing author pages and read how the same picture inspired them, to what, you won't know unless you go read them. They are listed on our group page above and below or, if you prefer, the writers are listed one by one like tears.
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Ribbons of Red |
He approached the platform, but slipped ever so
slightly on his upward bounce. His timing and balance off, an otherwise always
perfectly executed move caused his head to hit the platform upon decent.
The horrified gasp from the gallery was so loud...so thick...Coach
thought it might catch Henry, suspending him in safety. But, it did not; Henry
drifted into the water with a clumsy, slow-motion grace of a rag-doll followed
by tear-stained satin ribbons of red.
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Excellent dark breath-holding flash
ReplyDeleteOh wow, Muffy. I so wasn't expecting that! Awesome take on this picture!
ReplyDeleteWonderful imagery. I especially like the idea of a gasp being thick enough to turn solid. Fantastic.
ReplyDeleteBreathtaking. I love the way you described the gasp. I heard it and it almost made me gasp too. Awesome flash, so vivid
ReplyDeleteNow that was a twist of a story! Ouch!! Awesome view on the picture and the details in your story amazing. Made me wince as I read the story. Def want to know more of what happens to him and if he survived. Amazing Flash!
ReplyDeleteGreat flash. For some reason, it got me hooked in reading more.
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