Friday, September 19, 2014

Flash Fiction Friday, September 19, 2014 ~ The Lifeguard

Flash Fiction Friday came so fast this week, but I don't want you to do the same! You know what we do on Fridays: you put your lips together and blow and we write a 100 word piece inspired by a common photograph. This week it is the photograph below.

What does it say to you when you look into this intimate moment? I'll tell you what it brought to my mind; read below. Then, do be a dear and have a jaunty saunter to their passionate pages to read what they have prepared for you, yes, just you!! You can catch the list below or at any of the links I have put delicately before your finger tips. But, before you go? Please leave me a comment and I'll try to think of a way to repay your kindness. 
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The Lifeguard
The water was hot and piercing, a stark contrast to the cold surf.  His hands were everywhere, on every curve, gently caressing my skin with the soapy smoothness.  He bathed me tenderly and washed my hair. He rinsed my body thoroughly of the sand, grit and seaweed, running his fingers though my shoulder length curly auburn hair.  My skin was pink-blue from the cold ocean’s grasp and hot from the shower’s comfort...tingling.

He leaned across me, “Everything will be alright, now.“ 

His aroma was a warm, musky comfort: a manly mix of fragrance and ocean.

Then it was gone.  








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16 comments :

  1. Oh mysterious. Was it imagination or something else?

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    1. What was it, then? Thanks for stopping by, Michaela, and leaving a comment. Very much appreciated. xo

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    1. One never knows, perhaps......Thanks for the visit and the comment, Angelica. xo

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  3. Ooh now there's a mystery to be explained. Real or imagination. Very sexy. Excellent visuals. Loved your words. Great flasher

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    1. Spooky!! I guess we will never know...Thank you, dearest, for you visit and kind comments. xo

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  4. Water cleanses... make things new ....lovely flash

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    1. Yes, thank you for coming by and dropping some ink. Xo

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  5. Very nice! The story is just as sexy as the photo!

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    1. Thank you for stopping by, Daily. What a wonderful surprise. And thank you for your encouraging comment. Much appreciated. xo

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  6. great very mysterious flash Muffy. Who was he and where did he go

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    1. Thank you so much, Jules. It is always a pleasure when you visit and spread your ink. And to answer your Qs, I have no idea!! LOL. xo

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  7. The descriptions were so detailed and real, the end was a real twist. Excellent.

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  8. Oooh where is he gone? Was he ever really there? Great flash, Muffy :-)

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  9. Ohhh Shivers!! This was awesome! Had me hooked, and wanting to know more of her mysterious stranger. Was he real, was she part of the sea, was she dreaming or did something happen to him? Was there an accident on the ocean? Def need to expand on this short story. Awesome job! :)I am doing better, migraine has let up but still have small headaches.

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