Tantalyzing Tuesday Teaser is upon us once more. It is a day I love to indulge myself with by writing my interpretation of a picture prompt of my own selection. Today, I have chosen a dance between lovers in a smoke filled, darkened Cantina drawn together by the rhythm of a sole guitar.
And while you are entertaining yourself, but after you please leave me a comment, visit the other participating scribes for their inspirational pieces. They are at the link above or listed like notes dancing across a page of sheet music below. Enjoy, lovers....
Seated at the bar in the smoke filled room, only her pale
exotic profile and the flesh of her legs were visible in the darkness. The
achingly soulful music from the lone guitar rose from the depths like a
strengthening, mesmerizing blaze. She toyed with a dirty Martini while the alabaster cleavage of her breasts rose with her nervous breath.
And while you are entertaining yourself, but after you please leave me a comment, visit the other participating scribes for their inspirational pieces. They are at the link above or listed like notes dancing across a page of sheet music below. Enjoy, lovers....
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| Dance Me Through Love |
She felt him behind her; he moved so close, she was warmed
by his heat. She shifted, uneasily, and crossed her long legs at the knees,
exposing more lace covered flesh.
Tonight, unlike any other night, he lowered his open mouth to her neck and whispered above the guitar, “Dance me through love”. His soft, feathered breath sent flames down her body and threatened a seductive inferno.
Tonight, unlike any other night, he lowered his open mouth to her neck and whispered above the guitar, “Dance me through love”. His soft, feathered breath sent flames down her body and threatened a seductive inferno.
She rose gracefully, exposing more of her thigh through the
slit in her tight skirt. Floating on currents of magnetic surrender into his
embrace, he held her fully, pressing his body into her eager curves.
He slid his impatient fingertips under her arm, at the soft fullness of her breast, then down to the hot small of her back. He pulled her tight so she could feel his growing response to the fragrance of her hair.
He slid his impatient fingertips under her arm, at the soft fullness of her breast, then down to the hot small of her back. He pulled her tight so she could feel his growing response to the fragrance of her hair.
“Yes…...........” as she
melted to his will.
Participating Authors
That was wonderful, Muffy. I could almost hear the music, smell the smoke and the alcohol in the air, and the feel of his hands around me. Lovely and atmospheric!
ReplyDeleteThere was music playing on the blog. Guns n Roses, Slash's "Obsession". One of my all time favs! You can't hear it on your phone, but you can on your laptop....... <3 xo
DeleteA perfect romantic moment, descriptive phrases written to perfection, creating an aura of sensations around her and him. I had to reread the line at the end several times to catch the full meaning and your appropriate choice of words"she could feel his growing response to the fragrance in her hair;" Fabulous ending!
ReplyDeletebeautifully written Muffy and the way the words, image and music all go together is perfect
ReplyDeleteSuch a sensuous tease, Muffy. This was lovely :-)
ReplyDeleteExcellent. Sensuous, weotic and visual perfection. I could almost smell the arousal as the two came closer to dance through love
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful so arousing tease I liked your style She melted to his will so fantastic
ReplyDeleteMelted.. yes, your stories cause just that reaction! You are adored.. ~V~
ReplyDelete'floating on currents of magnetic surrender'... Wow! That's some magic right there. And great guitar selection. So well done. Mahvelous Dahling! Simply mahvelous.....
ReplyDeleteYou are truly amazing my friend... you just take me there!
ReplyDelete-poeticweaver
Interesting choice of word use for your visuals, Muffy. The adjectives gave depth to the short as well as clarity to the reader. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteLady G
Oooh, such a seductive write, Muffy. Great!! Dance Me Through Love never needs a shove. It comes from his whisper and her desire to be loved. Thank God she said YES..as she succumbed to a mutual thrill. Lulled to ecstasy while listening to Slash is a rock that rolls the soul. Love it, Muffy
ReplyDeleteA.h. Scott
Nothing to melt the will quite like a seductive dance. Perfectly captured moment, Muffy, and the previous comment gets it perfectly. That 'Yes' is as powerful as an orgasm. 'Duelling Banjos' didn't quite go with it though... ;)
ReplyDeleteNo, Jake! 'Dueling Banjos' doesn't go with it well! Hahaha!!! I had Slash from Guns 'n Roses playing 'Obsession Confession'. If you have never heard him play this, you are in for a real treat that DOES go well with this piece! 'Banjos' is for the FFF I did on Friday, 'Hide'n Go Seek'!!!
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