Today is the launching of a new group of very talented and sexy writers called Tantalizing Tuesday. We are going to tease, tantalize and ignite your fantasies with a short tale, based on a photo of our own selection and 200 words, no more ~ no less, every Tuesday. Well, as you might expect, I joined this fabulous group of writers late last night and I have to cheat. So, this is a repost of a prior write and it is 415 words in length, making it my "Unofficial" submission. I hope you enjoy the read...........When you are finished with me, please leave a comment and go have a read of my purient partners with their creative posts. Bye-bye for now and enjoy:) xo
For Me
There is a captivating sort of magical look in your eyes that tells me there are a few surprises lurking within that brain (and mayhaps, those loins) of yours. It is the kind of look that invites me to step closer, much closer, until we are touching but not touching; just sort of "feeling" each other's presence.
My face hovers so close to your own and our eyes are not just locked into each other but more magnetically drawn, like beams. I reach up and brush the side of your face with my hand, and your face is so close I can feel the warmth rising from you.
I keep my eyes on yours as long as the connection will last and then I lean down and gently, ever so gently, brush my lips on yours. It is positively electric and without noticing our bodies are suddenly pressed fully against each other pushing with a sense of urgency and need. Our mouths press together and tongue seeks tongue, warmth seeks warmth and need seeks need...xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo for what seems like just an instant, but who really knows...
Things happen for reasons, good reasons we have no business questioning or comprehending...
Here. Now. I want you...
I want to look into those mischievous eyes and see them soften with desire. I want to look up at your face from my explorations of your velvet folds and see a look of complete passionate surrender overtake you. I want to feel my touch move you to places we can only explore together...
I want you to sit astride me, so I can look up at you. And I want you to ride me to the edge of the abyss, where we both hover, hang in that sweet incalculable moment; that moment of wanting to tumble over, to plummet, but wanting even more to NOT...to have it last, as long as we can stand it, there on the edge of cataclysmic satisfaction, but holding it off, and holding it, and holding it, and....
I can't wait for the part where you finally gasp and sob and your body spasms and lurches and you fall against my chest, our bodies pushed together in the heat and the fertile humidity and your hair cascades across my face and I breath you in; I breath US in, rich, earthy, the smell of fresh baked bread, or just uncorked champagne. Us, yes, us; our smell, our wonderful unique particular aroma...hmmmmmmm
It is to be loved, my darling, it is for loving...It stays with me, my love, it stays with me...
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Please go visit my creative friends and have a quick read on their photo selections and creative pieces. It'll only take a minute..........you'll be glad you did....Trust me:) xo
Liegh Bradshaw: http://lieghbradshawscage.wordpress.com
Bonni Sansom: http://bonnisansom.blogspot.com/
Ketia Davis: http://bluwaterprincezz.blogspot.com/
Jp Archer: http://jp-archer.blogspot.com
Davee Jones: http://finless.blogspot.com/
I loved that. How fantastically passionate it was. The tender touched of love. Excellent post.
ReplyDeleteYou are always so kind, thank you, Bonni.
DeleteI love, love so very much, that scent of sweet yeastiness; yes, the bread, the champagne, that our post lovemaking brings. When we lie back, (momentarily) sated, the sweat still sticky on our bodies and the air fills with that enticing aroma; umm a bakery we have made, champagne we have opened and spilled.
ReplyDeleteA chef, a baker, a sommalier AND a deft lover..............? Who could ask for more?:) xo
DeleteI loved it! The descriptions were awesome; eyes drawn like magnets, lips seeming electric, incalculable moments, the smell of fresh bread & uncorked champagne. Great piece! :)
ReplyDeleteI looked for your submission on your blog, but there was none. You should join our group and come play with us. Thank you for your kind comments. They are very appreciated both by me and the object of my affection.:) xo
DeleteYou drew me right in with the very first sentence. You have a wonderful way with words. I could feel that first look, taste the breath and sense the body spasm. Wow, looking forward to your next Tuesday Tale
ReplyDeleteI really liked the piece,very imaginative.w/be back for more. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteTantalizing, mind gripping and Absolutely Hott!
ReplyDeleteEasy to get lost in here. Wow, I'm very amazed!
ReplyDeleteWow ! So fantastic and loving post , Really Muffy you have explored the inner feelings and desires of a lover , It seems as if A MASTER is telling the Secrets of love makin , Really I love this post and the photograph as if Apsara (heavenly beauty ) has arrived on earth , Thank you Muffy Ji
ReplyDeleteWinderfully descriptive writing. You certainly have a way of making the words fit perfectly
ReplyDeleteWhat a ride, and I love the teasing and how you wish the moment to be at it's highest, but it lasts longer under the very little self control you have, just to make the ride last longer and the release that much better. Awesome write. Excellent Erotica! Bravo! :D
ReplyDeleteOh Muffy, this is sooo beautiful...so erotic...it takes my breath away from the very first moment. No more words my friend....
ReplyDeleteyummy, sensuous, seductive, and delicious! wonderful post, Muffy
ReplyDeleteBEAUTIFUL!!
ReplyDeleteMuffy you have such skill. Reading your post is almost like wrapping myself in a soft warm blanket.
Very sexy! I can't wait to read more.
DeleteSo hot erotic and yummy post loved that so much ,Thanks Muffy ji
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