We Pupils of Prurient Pedagogy have teamed up for a friendly challenge each Friday based on our creative response to a single photo. The objective is to write a 100-word piece, no more and no less. Joining me today is a bevy of fantastic authors, who have written their own interpretation of the picture below for Flash Fiction Friday. You are but a heartbeat away, so please..........enjoy:) xo
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| Breathless |
Breathless, I rolled to my stomach and held the pillow I wished was you. Anticipation added to the single bead of sweat that ran down my back, pooling at my waistband. I imagined your tongue tracing the journey as you ran your hands along my back to my shoulders. Breathless, your knees gently opened my legs as you lay atop me. Your hands follow to mine and gently wrap finger to finger as you bury your face in my neck, inhaling my desire.
Breathless, I wander my dream of meeting you one day, longing to share just one kiss with you…….
Interested in more? More takes on this interesting photo, silly! They are not at all alike and each submission is written by one of my dear friends. Follow this link to Flasher Fiction Friday to get Flashed by all of us. You will so be glad you indulged yourself:) xo
Nice!!! I followed that drip of sweat all the way down to where it needed to go and beyond.
ReplyDeleteOhhh I was feeling every breath. And to discover its a longing, not real, oh I hope he finds his love
ReplyDeleteOhh, only a dream. Darn. Very nice, Muffy
ReplyDeleteVery sensual and vivid. I like the longing portrayed by his words. Lovely!!
ReplyDeleteSo sexy and hot! I loved it! Well done!
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU MUFFY JI SO HOT FANTASY POST I ALWAYS LOVE YOUR GREAT STORY WEB .KEEP IT UP.
ReplyDeleteDamn, that was a smooth and tingling to my senses there. Great FFF, I would love to read the climax portion.
ReplyDeletevery lovely as always Muffy. I enjoy your sensual way with words :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent post Muffy. You could feel his longing, trace the bead of sweat and imagine his lover nudging his legs apart.
ReplyDeleteyou will...
ReplyDeleteI believe you will!!
ReplyDeleteFabulous FFF, as always.
Beautifully written. Very sensual and sexy!
ReplyDeleteI certainly hope you get your kiss. Great Flash!
ReplyDeleteVery detailed imagery, beautiful flash
ReplyDeleteInteresting - I have a poem breathless and I was thinking you should write one. Very touching and poignant.
ReplyDeleteThis is one of the best FFF's I've read, hands down. Love it!
ReplyDeleteOo wow, this post had me “breathless”. It was poetic and very nicely written. Love it!
ReplyDeleteNow that is an awesome daydream. I could feel his yearning for his lover. Very nicely done Ms. Muffy. Your FFFs are always hot and nice to read.
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