Friday, October 11, 2013

Flash Fiction Friday, October 11, 2013 ~ The Bitter End

I am feeling a little naughty, a little frisky today, this Flash Fiction Friday. So, I have written a short 100 word flash based upon the photograph below, common to all the participating authors. Please read, comment and clear the tables, one-by-one, by reading all the submissions in today's challenge.

You will find that the link above or the list below will lead you to the blogs of all the other talented author participants. I hope you enjoy my flirtation with Lady Fate. Destiny is a wicked equalizer but does in the end, the Bitter End, deliver a purified soul. Enjoy.......consider, perhaps, a change to your wicked ways and your own destiny.

The Bitter End
She walked into the Bitter End with her cue case, thigh high boots and attitude. The tables were cracking and as expected, he was there. Tonight, it would be him.
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She seduced, lured and kissed him deeply in the misty shadows. He followed her home. She was wet with anticipation. He stripped his drenched shirt then yanked her tube top down, her mini up and lifted her by his fingers plunged into her creamy core. She gasped; he inhaled her sex and they rolled along the wall into her apartment.

She wondered how long before tempting Lady Fate resulted in her own Bitter End.





So, please visit my prurient partners in erotic pedagogy and have a dip into their creative minds to see how they were inspired by this magical photograph. Please leave them a comment, too, as we do this not only for your pleasure and entertainment, but also as an exercise to improve our crafty wiles:) xo 






14 comments :

  1. She had schemed on seducing this man in advance, but how was it going to be her Bitter End? Was she seduced in pleasure she couldn't release and had to stay with him? You have me asking so many questions. The tone of your flash is dark and damp,even the sex. Fabulous flash.

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  2. She's tempting the fate. I love that about this flash. It's right on the edge of dark and desire. It's completely yummy. Well done.

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  3. Completely HOT! Such dark heated desire! I'm in awe.

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  4. Love the hint of danger in this one, Muffy :-)

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  5. That seems to have sparked a story there Muffy. Great flash. Xxx

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  6. risky in both games. the pool hustler and the sexy vixen. great 100

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  8. Insanely hot --> "lifted her by his fingers plunged into her creamy core." ... love it!

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  9. Wow so hot and yummy desire really enjoyed your awesome words

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  10. Kudos. Wonderful flash . Elegantly and expertly written with passion, heat and desire. Yet so many questions are left unanswered. Muffy, you just have to turn this into a longer story.

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  11. Wow. Very delicious piece.

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  12. *fans face* wow! I love the hot detail. Got me fanning my face. Purrfectly done! Great flash. Def got him into her web. ;-)

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