Well......I had my trouble with this photograph. As you know, it is Flash Fiction Friday: 100 words or less about a photo that is not of our individual choosing. Now, he's a handsome guy, I'll give you that, and he looks like a good kid.......he just didn't speak to me until I felt his boredom.
What do we all do when we are bored? I don't know about you, but I entertain myself with something sexy. So that is just what he did.
Now, what I implore you to do is to read my little sexnip and leave a comment. Then saunter over to all my friends who are also writing for your pleasure today based on this very same photo. See what they came up with. They can be found at the link above or listed like pageant beauties below, one by one. But, first........leave me a comment. It's a little like a hug. ((()))
Here you have it.....................American Beauty.
What do we all do when we are bored? I don't know about you, but I entertain myself with something sexy. So that is just what he did.
Now, what I implore you to do is to read my little sexnip and leave a comment. Then saunter over to all my friends who are also writing for your pleasure today based on this very same photo. See what they came up with. They can be found at the link above or listed like pageant beauties below, one by one. But, first........leave me a comment. It's a little like a hug. ((()))
Here you have it.....................American Beauty.
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| American Beauty |
The pageant contestants snaked from off stage through to the catwalk.
They were all breathtakingly beautiful: smiling
at me, every one of them, eager……….and I bored.
My thoughts drifted to you…..drifted into us…
When did I release my heart to you? Was it the moment you turned your head to greet
me and your whirling, rain scented golden locks brushed my cheek? Was it the warm welcome of both your hands as
you grasp mine to embrace your smiling welcome? Perhaps the subtle pulse of your heartbeat in
the small of your neck made me your prisoner.
What does it matter now………?
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Ah, I like that. Thinking of my loved one sure cheers me up when I'm bored :-)
ReplyDeleteThe last line is heartfelt and I'm guessing he blew it. Lovely flash.
ReplyDeleteoh wow, love than honest emotion. xx
ReplyDeleteA lump came to my throat. Reading it makes me put my poetry head on again as I feel for him.
ReplyDeleteNo other beauty compares to thee
Or light of love that I still see ...
I may carry this on
Well Muffy, what did this man to do fuck up his relationship? I want more. Excellent. Real and heartfelt.
ReplyDeleteI like that you took readers into his head
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written
ReplyDelete*heart strings pulled* wow so deep and powerful. Great flash!
ReplyDeleteI have the gut feeling this person is lamenting the loss of this person in his life if not love. I felt a deep sadness for him in your excellent flow of words from the beginning through the end of your flash.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful emotion! That was so sweet! Great flash!
ReplyDeleteLovely as always my dear. xo
ReplyDelete-poeticweaver