Thursday, December 8, 2011

Perdition

Flash Fiction Friday is upon us...............yet again.  Please visit all my playmates in this endevour to keep the creative juices flowing.  But, as I always hope, start with me:) xo  
  
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The tumblers of the lock fell into place as he twisted the key.  He opened the cellar door and the light knifed, inched slowly, bathing her face. She was ready; prepared in the dress he wanted her to wear: crinoline and lace, satin straps and ribbons but no underwear......no panties, still.

How long would she have to endure, to pretend.......to want him? How long had she been here, been stolen from her life, her home and family?

"Yes, Master..............."

How long would she have to welcome his twisted affections in the darkness? 

Oh, God.......hear me, find me or let me die……………….....………

22 comments :

  1. *brr* Another chilling and terrifying one, Muffy! I can definitely see the coldness and desperation of this picture though and how it appeared that way. I used the coldness, myself. I hope she finds a way out!

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  2. Wow, that was deep. The fact that she’d rather die than endore the torture of being his bounded bride had me like damn. I felt her pain and terror. Good work!

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  3. ohhhh...chilling yes...but (eye wiggle) also very...inticing...lol.

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  4. Wonderful FFF. I could feel the tension and fear

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  5. Very vivid interpretation of her despair. very intriguing FFF. Nice work, 'licious!

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  6. Very twisted and sad Muffy, You can really feel her despair. Nice work

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  7. Oh that poor woman!!! so beautiful and yet so sad!!
    great post

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  8. Wow. A wonderful twist on the picture. Nice job Muffy.

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  9. oh wow! creepy, and sort of hopeless!

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  10. Welcome Muffy ji , Thank you so much for FFF, You have touched very hard reality of life , still there are millions of women who live in male dominating societies live life suppressing their passions and desires and thirst of love un quenched . . Greetings and welcome Muffy Ji

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  11. Oh Muffy, this post reminds me of an episode of NCIS. Some nut case was kidnapping women, putting wedding dresses on them and then locking them up in a dungeon - until he got tired of them. Wow, I love your twist on this week's picture. You have taken the tortured look on her face and turned it into a story, in only 100 words. You rock.

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  12. What a creepy, yet, awesome FFF. Good job. Poor girl. I want to burst in and save her, too.

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  13. Poor girl. Hope someone finds her soon. Great post!

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  14. Aw, Muffy! Get her out of there! Emotional 100.

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  15. Very dark and sinister but oh so good. Loved it

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  16. SCARY!! Holy crap! You gave me the chills.

    GREAT JOB!!

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  17. You've got a gift with the macabre -- well done!!

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  18. Beautiful and haunting work. I am amazed at how each of us saw something different yet some of us saw the same. Guess it is our perspectives on life that color what we see.

    Great story, and scary.

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