tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post6452988016173401388..comments2024-03-03T12:10:38.805-05:00Comments on Muffy Wilson: Flash Fiction Friday, September 27, 2013 ~ The SketchMuffy Wilsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00659495646622567840noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post-67080859981506054662013-09-30T06:05:37.629-04:002013-09-30T06:05:37.629-04:00"Enraged, his face grew red, his neck swelled..."Enraged, his face grew red, his neck swelled against his starched white collar and his pulse throbbed in purple bulges against his temples". That was an incredibly great opening. I saw his rage- described perfectly. I could feel both their emotions. Too bad their both me. Lol.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11404100997386474731noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post-28524178709091970102013-09-28T21:44:07.593-04:002013-09-28T21:44:07.593-04:00Wowser!! Heart pounding, I love the descriptions a...Wowser!! Heart pounding, I love the descriptions and emotion and how you describe her appearance and behavior. Awesome job!Rolling Muse in The Roseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11584542480191015817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post-36690109529392274752013-09-27T15:26:44.714-04:002013-09-27T15:26:44.714-04:00Love the interaction between these two :-)Love the interaction between these two :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post-40287860358132075432013-09-27T15:20:01.248-04:002013-09-27T15:20:01.248-04:00I got goosies! Fabulous. xxI got goosies! Fabulous. xxJ.P. Stevenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05033779212923707114noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post-4773987345155505362013-09-27T11:21:52.876-04:002013-09-27T11:21:52.876-04:00Fabulous writing, the give and take between these ...Fabulous writing, the give and take between these to is quite powerful.S.J. Mayleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071906614814860932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post-6248416558214419682013-09-27T10:23:49.470-04:002013-09-27T10:23:49.470-04:00fantastic writing, as always, Muffy. I love itfantastic writing, as always, Muffy. I love itJulian Sponghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09116901320575396141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post-30673380005808309322013-09-27T10:18:27.291-04:002013-09-27T10:18:27.291-04:00Always wonderful ,thank you Muffy Ji , Always wonderful ,thank you Muffy Ji , AUTHOR JARNAIL BADHANhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12012490582436679393noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post-66824418698963339622013-09-27T09:56:17.378-04:002013-09-27T09:56:17.378-04:00I love what she said to him, left me breathless. g...I love what she said to him, left me breathless. great piece xoAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05489431983751371160noreply@blogger.com