tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post7471455520807470038..comments2024-03-03T12:10:38.805-05:00Comments on Muffy Wilson: Flash Fiction Friday, 17 October 2014 ~ The Bachelor PartyMuffy Wilsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00659495646622567840noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post-23507856144103181092014-10-19T20:54:04.510-04:002014-10-19T20:54:04.510-04:00WOW! Ok I was not expecting that twist. Great deta...WOW! Ok I was not expecting that twist. Great detail in wording and the end, made my jaw drop. Great story! I see a pending longer story in this. ;-) Rolling Muse in The Roseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11584542480191015817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post-42060524652486146712014-10-19T07:34:14.814-04:002014-10-19T07:34:14.814-04:00Oh wow, Muffy! That's a flash with a powerful ...Oh wow, Muffy! That's a flash with a powerful sting. Loved it!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post-43077490307335731502014-10-18T16:44:34.434-04:002014-10-18T16:44:34.434-04:00Very dark, Muffy. Would love to know what happened...Very dark, Muffy. Would love to know what happened between her getting in the car and being 'dropped off' againJulian Sponghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09116901320575396141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post-16069592976246007122014-10-18T15:57:48.464-04:002014-10-18T15:57:48.464-04:00Vivid descriptions! I saw her getting into the car...Vivid descriptions! I saw her getting into the car, the others' eyes on her. Hated to see her life cut short. Too real. Great for mystery, suspense, or thriller. Excellent flash!Dariel Rayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06636771393462118904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post-30415287190417838292014-10-17T11:25:47.559-04:002014-10-17T11:25:47.559-04:00Damn, what a twist in the end. Very clever way to ...Damn, what a twist in the end. Very clever way to get someone thrown off.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post-73637328626761678522014-10-17T09:49:12.272-04:002014-10-17T09:49:12.272-04:00I loved the descriptions of her; totally brilliant...I loved the descriptions of her; totally brilliant. I just wasn't prepared for the punchline, you caught me off guard. She obviously played a dangerous game. Excellent flasherNaomi Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16693171140434692340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post-75718249766380148842014-10-17T09:34:17.909-04:002014-10-17T09:34:17.909-04:00I was chuckling with your descriptions of her unti...I was chuckling with your descriptions of her until your words twisted my mood radically to shock. How could you taunt me with this flash? You must have been in a dark mood when you wrote it. Your vivid descritptions control the reader's mood by transforming this emotionally impacted story from one of fun to one of tragedy. Excellent.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11404100997386474731noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332800490492257650.post-21546576905334861382014-10-17T09:30:48.354-04:002014-10-17T09:30:48.354-04:00Frightening, and doubtless more common that anyone...Frightening, and doubtless more common that anyone wants to admit.Angelica Dawsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06590063222683830585noreply@blogger.com